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Aly Prades's avatar

I love this, Alyssa! And I love summer, too. Oof, “I really want to lose four pounds”—that last line! I also have a hydrangea by my front door and I never thought about if my kids will remember it, or what details will scream quintessential summer to them when they’re grown. I don’t play mahjong, but loved the rhythm of your last stanza. Your words are dancing on the page.

Kimberly Knowle - Zeller's avatar

Love love love!! And I also can’t count the number of popsicles.

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